The Most Amazing Mum

In our class this week we have been learning how to write by showing not telling. We had to do a piece of writing about our mum's. Hope you enjoy reading through my work.

This person is the most amazing person I know. That person is my mum, she likes to take pride in what she wears and what she looks like. Mum always likes to put on perfume and smell nice. Mum is a very tall person and always dresses up nice when she is going to work or is just going out.

Mum's one of those people that act nice all the time and really is in a bad mood. “But when she is in a bad mood you will know about it” Mum when she starts to sneeze she will not stop for like 5 minutes, It gets so annoying. The best thing about my mum is that she is a very caring person and likes to help anyone in any way she can.

Mum affects those around her by being a caring person who likes to make sure others feel good about themselves. Mum always says to me she wants the best for me and always gets me what I want in reason. All my mum does is try and make everything I do easily for me.

Mum’s one of them people that like to buy nice things and make sure that they will fit in with the house or what she is wearing, she takes pride in her appearance and the house and makes sure her family look nice and cared for too. Mum lives down a nice street and the street is so amazing because it is covered with trees.

What I found hard: Trying to put my words into showing not telling.

What I found easy: Finding the amazing things about my mum.

What I could do better next time: What I think I could do better next time is, try and make my writing sound like I am showing it not telling it.