In the middle of know where

W.A.LT: to use show not tell write to imply and read to infer.

I am at school doing my school work and suddenly i pass out on the table. My head was getting woozy and my eye of site was getting blurry all of a sudden my head is on the table and i can’t see anything Friends are trying to help me but i am still lying there with my head on the table. The teachers call 111. The  ambulance comes and takes me away to a place i don’t know about. I wake up in a room with one big light hanging above me and i am laying on a table. I can hear the loud footsteps coming over to me, suddenly a man in all white leans over me and says “hi” i scream as loud as i can but then i realized that i am in the middle on nowhere. I am thinking what to do? To be continued…

if anyone wants to give me some feed back it will really help me in my writing and i respond to your feed back 

What i found hard:  what i found hard is checking my work 

What i found easy: coming up the the idears to write.

What i could do next time: i think i can put in some more writing.

Information Report v2

In our class we are learning about tapa cloths/ngatu. we had to create a information report about it her is mine. hope you enjoy.

What I found hard: Finding the information,

What I found easy: Writing the text

What I could do next time: What I think I can do next time is pun in some more text and make my phont better so people can read it easy.

Natgu / Tapa Cloth

In our class we have been learning about Tapa cloths. we had to write an information report. just sating it is not a finished and will be soon.



Things you need to know about the tapa cloth (natgu)



What do you people think what a tapa cloth is. That is what we all wonder. If you read this information report i will tell you what it is.



First paragraph, how the tapa cloth is made.

A tapa cloth is a light piece of paper that is made out of mulberry tree. It is coked out in water for a overnight. Then the strips are beaten with a wooden club until they become wider and longer. After the have done that it is hung up to dry. Now when it is dry you can lay iy out on the grass and paint anything of it.



How much a tapa cloth can be worth.

A tapa cloth can cost someone up to 800 to 12,00 dollars only if it is made the right way and have been taken care of.



Second paragraph, what is the significance of a tapa cloth.

Posted

We have been reading a book called posted. We have been gave actives to complete each week. Just letting you know that if my worn is not finished it is because i am working on it through the week and by the end it will be finished. hope you  like it.

What I found easy: creating my own images.
What I found hard: finding information about the John David Anderson.
What I could do next time: making my text stand out better and picking the right background.

Sacraments D.L.O

in week one of term 3 we had been learning about Sacraments, we had to create images for each Sacraments. here are what my images of the Sacraments look like. hope you like them.


what i found easy: creating the images.
what i found hard: finding the images to make.
what i could do better next time: i think i could work on my drawings more.

Interesting Work About Japan

In our class we got to pick a country  to study on. I chose japan, here is some of my activities. Just letting you now that if you see things that are not finished it is because i work on an activities  each week and i might not finish it. Anyway hope you enjoy looking at it.

Amazing Writing

In our class we are reading a book called posted, we had an activities  to write a persuasive writing on why I think phones should be in school. hope you like it.

Should cellphones be banned in school

In my opinion i think children should have phones in school time here are the reasons why.

Say your child has to go home because he is sick and the school does not have your parents phone number he can get his phone and call his parents. Also i think having a phone at school is great because if you are in a sticky situation you can use the handy google to help you.

Another reason is that say  you are in a place you should not be in. you can ring your friends to come and help you get out. (and maybe look around)

In the end i think it is a really great idea to let people take their phones to school.

What i fund easy: writing the story

what i found hard: coming up with the right word and making sour it makes sense

what i could do next time: what i think i could do next time is put in some more reasons into my writing