Pig The Pug

In our class we read a book called Pig the Pug, We had to finish off the story. we had to try and make it sound like a news paper article.

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Did he die or live.

On the 9th of  September Pig the Pug fell or was pushed out a window. Police, forensics and ambulances were there within minutes.They rushed Pig the Pug to the hospital while the police and the forensic were looking through the apartment for any clues. As police were looking through the apartment they found a suspect in the building with black gloves and a black mask on.

Police took the suspect into custody. Police question the suspect for hours to get answers. While the police were asking question to the suspect, surgeons were doing a operation on pig the pug because he lots of broken bones.

Police asked the suspect what he was doing with the mask and black gloves. He said “ I just like walking around with back gloves and a black mask on ” police are not believing his story from what he is saying. To be Continued!!!

What I found hard: What I found hard was trying to make it sound like a new paper article.

What I could do next time: Make sure I finish my work on time.

What I found easy: Coming up with descriptive language to put into my new paper article.

The Creepy House...

W.A.L.T: Write a Descriptive piece of writing of this picture using Descriptive language.

It was a dark and cloudy night and I was standing outside this old broken house thinking if I should go in. All I can hear is the house creaking and breaking. 

My tummy says I should not go in but my mind is telling me to go in, but then I hear this voice calling my name, “Jack-Jack" come on in it is nice and warm” I am so scared to say anything to the person because I don’t know what the person is going to do or say next.

I finally decided to go into the house, when I walk up to the door the stairs creak as I walk on them. I knock on the door but then the door just falls over. I walk in so scared hoping nothing bad happens. Holding my breath every step I take. When I walk in all I can see is spider webs and bugs all over the walls and the roof.

What I did well: setting out my work in paragraphs,

What I need to work on: my editing on my work,

What I found easy: coming up with ideas and Descriptive words.

W.A.L.T: create a interactive DLO about the internet.

what I found hard: what I found hard was finding out how to make a quiz,

What I found easy: what I found easy was finding out the information,

What I could do better next time: what I could do better next time is putting in more information in my work,