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Tuesday, 22 August 2017

Most Sporty Family.


W.A.L.T To write an interesting poem about our own Family.

sporty Family.
Yelling  Yelling  at the television, family members Yelling  yaaah! The rugby’s on and I am standing up screaming at the T.V. hoping my team will win. Try after try and kick after kick they keep on coming. In the end we won and I am really tired.

My Mum is always tired after a hard day at work.
Nick is a sport freak and all he watches is sport.
My Dad loves his bike riding and hiking through the mountains.
My brother is always screaming in my ear.
The one part I love about my family is we all love sport.

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2 comments:

  1. Hey Kurtis great story my favorite part was when you said "I love about is that they like sport's. Also when did you start this pecies of writing? because if I was your teacher I will give an A+. How long did it take to make this? Well anyways that is the best story I had ever read.

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    1. Hi Micah, thank you for commenting on my blog. Well Micah it took me about 20 to 30 minutes to write this piece of work. I know that you like your sport and you play Rugby League. What is the position that you play in your team? I just wanted you to be aware that the piece of writing is not a story, rather it is a poem. If it did not seem like a poem let me know for next time.

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