Red poem.
W.A.L.T: write a colour poem
Red is the flames that keeps me so warm
Red is the lava that’s like a bookworm
Red is the blood that keeps me alive
Red is the strawberries that makes me survive
Red is the sunset that warms me up
Red is the tomatoes that make me say yup.
I love Red because it reminds me of a sunset.
Hi zach I really like how you put red writing in your poem to show people that it is about red..when you put the two first rymes I didn’t notice but I did notice the other ones.maybe next time you could use red font.
ReplyDeleteHi Kurtis, I really liked your poem. I like how you made the words red. Once I had to make a poem about my favorite animal. Can you try adding some more.
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